(Keep in mind I'm working on it alone ATM, and I made all these myself, but I'm open to constructive criticism, and especially help!) (at the same time please don't be too harsh XD)
(edit) You guys seem to be interested, so here's the full scoop:
(Keep in mind I'm working on it alone ATM, and I made all these myself, but I'm open to constructive criticism, and especially help!) (at the same time please don't be too harsh XD)
I like your art style
I'm nothing but a mass of concrete yet my heart is calling my name
My concerns is that you might struggle to have the characters animate, the concept art just looks very flat and stiff. I would recommend creating a more detailed concept sheet like this...
My concerns is that you might struggle to have the characters animate, the concept art just looks very flat and stiff. I would recommend creating a more detailed concept sheet like this...
a turnaround? I was thinking of doing that, but I've already been losing sleep over this --- That'd be tough to fit in with school and moving... and sleep 💀
(Keep in mind I'm working on it alone ATM, and I made all these myself, but I'm open to constructive criticism, and especially help!) (at the same time please don't be too harsh XD)
Concept kinda reminds me of OK KO let’s be heroes (The RPG elements even though OK KOs was a mix of a RPG leveling and Power levels from Dragon Ball),I do like it though and do believe it could work.
I feel like the character designs could be cleaned up a little and could also be redone a bit The 4 characters in the doc provided kinda look the same in terms of body shape and design and you wanna avoid Same Face/Body Syndrome, the designs should be distinct enough so if you were to make them a silhouette, you could still tell who is who
Heres an example of what I’m doing with my own show (these are sketches)
(person on the left is a bit scaled down in size when in comparison to the one on the right)
The guy on the left and the girl on the right both have somewhat different body shapes, heights, and face shapes; even if it’s subtle, it still helps. also, posing somewhat matters with images so each character should have a different pose when it’s just a still image
I feel like the character designs could be cleaned up a little and could also be redone a bit The 4 characters in the doc provided kinda look the same in terms of body shape and design and you wanna avoid Same Face/Body Syndrome, the designs should be distinct enough so if you were to make them a silhouette, you could still tell who is who
Heres an example of what I’m doing with my own show (these are sketches)
(person on the left is a bit scaled down in size when in comparison to the one on the right)
The guy on the left and the girl on the right both have somewhat different body shapes, heights, and face shapes; even if it’s subtle, it still helps. also, posing somewhat matters with images so each character should have a different pose when it’s just a still image
Oh don't worry these characters have the same body shape, but their hair is intended to help tell them apart. besides, more characters look super different than these four.
(Keep in mind I'm working on it alone ATM, and I made all these myself, but I'm open to constructive criticism, and especially help!) (at the same time please don't be too harsh XD)
Concept kinda reminds me of OK KO let’s be heroes (The RPG elements even though OK KOs was a mix of a RPG leveling and Power levels from Dragon Ball),I do like it though and do believe it could work.
It's inspired by OK KO, Steven Universe, MHA, and based off of Pokemon, but the trainers ARE the Pokemon!
Concept kinda reminds me of OK KO let’s be heroes (The RPG elements even though OK KOs was a mix of a RPG leveling and Power levels from Dragon Ball),I do like it though and do believe it could work.
It's based on a combination of OK KO, Steven Universe, MHA, and Pokemon!
Concept kinda reminds me of OK KO let’s be heroes (The RPG elements even though OK KOs was a mix of a RPG leveling and Power levels from Dragon Ball),I do like it though and do believe it could work.
It's based on a combination of OK KO, Steven Universe, MHA, and Pokemon!
Be careful with basing things off of shows. A lot of times stuff can conflict heavily.
I'm nothing but a mass of concrete yet my heart is calling my name
Be careful with basing things off of shows. A lot of times stuff can conflict heavily.
Like not based off of in reality. The only one there it's actually based on is pokemon. I should've worded it better XD
the rest are minor inspirations.
Oh okay lol I've had friends try to do stuff that's "Like Steven Universe and DBZ". A show where they talk every issue out vs a show where problems are solved with fighting. Minor inspirations are good because you can pick and choose. But fully basing off of can lead to stuff like the example.
I'm nothing but a mass of concrete yet my heart is calling my name
Like not based off of in reality. The only one there it's actually based on is pokemon. I should've worded it better XD
the rest are minor inspirations.
Oh okay lol I've had friends try to do stuff that's "Like Steven Universe and DBZ". A show where they talk every issue out vs a show where problems are solved with fighting. Minor inspirations are good because you can pick and choose. But fully basing off of can lead to stuff like the example.