Looking for grammar and structure mistakes. Info is scarce, but don't shoot it down because of it. It deserves its place just like any other lost original animation.
Just vibin' here. Thanks to everyone who edited the Requiem for a Heavyweight article in terms of grammar. We made it to featured!
Good work on these! I'd say for the Wormholes page, my main advice is that if a section contains one very long paragraph it might be easier to read if it's split into two paragraphs instead. I edited it to do this for the Availability section. Also, I removed a subjective statement ("making it very hard to describe"). Last thing I'd say here is to try to include references that cover every claim made in a page - for instance, if it says that Nick Smith posted the video to r/obscuremedia, add the Reddit link as a reference there. I added this one.
For the Muppet page, there were a couple of capitalization issues that I fixed, and I also reworded the introduction, but otherwise great job!
Good work on these! I'd say for the Wormholes page, my main advice is that if a section contains one very long paragraph it might be easier to read if it's split into two paragraphs instead. I edited it to do this for the Availability section. Also, I removed a subjective statement ("making it very hard to describe"). Last thing I'd say here is to try to include references that cover every claim made in a page - for instance, if it says that Nick Smith posted the video to r/obscuremedia, add the Reddit link as a reference there. I added this one.
For the Muppet page, there were a couple of capitalization issues that I fixed, and I also reworded the introduction, but otherwise great job!
Hi. I am new here, and a few days ago, I made a page for the lost British horror film, Castle Sinister. Does anyone have anything that I should add/change? Keep in mind that information about Castle Sinister is highly limited, and as such I didn't have a lot of details to work with.
Hi. I am new here, and a few days ago, I made a page for the lost British horror film, Castle Sinister. Does anyone have anything that I should add/change? Keep in mind that information about Castle Sinister is highly limited, and as such I didn't have a lot of details to work with.